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I Shot The Moon
Contributed by
LittleWillow
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:36:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I shot the moon
and missed completely
I hit a star
it fell so sweetly
and then my dream
came tumbling down
and formed the jewels
on my golden crown
the center diamond
is still missing
the essential sparkle
to keep my dream living
the empty hole
as black as ebony
sings to me
a haunting melody
but I won't let it bother me
I must not stop trying
won't wander to the pasture
full of dreams that are dying
I won't give up
not anytime soon
and maybe next time
I'll hit the moon
Copyright ©
LittleWillow
... [
2004-06-05 17:36:45]
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Re: I Shot The Moon
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by quietdaze on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:38:25 PM AEST
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| I read your poems and liked all of them, you're very talented...I wish I could write like you do. This one was my favorite though..very nice. |
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Re: I Shot The Moon
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:50:28 PM AEST
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Good write.
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