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with just a look
Contributed by
quietdaze
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:02:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love you
Not only for what you are
But for how you make me feel
I love you
For putting your soft hand
Into my lonely heart
And finding things
I thought were gone forever
You have done it
With just a look
With just a touch
With just a smile
You have done it
By being yourself
I love you
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quietdaze
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2004-06-05 17:02:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: with just a look
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:23:03 PM AEST (User
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great!!! short and super sweet. I like poems like this right to the point and expresses so much. I have a few like this... great write!!A+++ |
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Re: with just a look
(User Rating: 1 ) by LittleWillow on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST (User
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Short and sweet! I gotta learn to write more short and sweet poems! (If you've read any of my work, I'm a descriptive word freak!) Very nice poem! |
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