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Worthwhile Pain
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:57:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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That my last overdose didn’t take it’s toll on me,
Because now I’m the happiest I could ever wish to be,
If I’d have died I would have deprived myself greatly,
I know I would have destroyed a future love by acting hastily.
After I’d come round I knew what I had to do,
I had to get out of my unhappy relationship and find a love so true,
I found the strength to put an end to my unhappiness,
It was my fear of being alone I finally had to confess.
I though it better to be with anyone than with no-one,
But that’s when my true unhappiness begun,
I entered into something unhealthy rather than being alone,
Just so I had someone to call me their own.
I stayed that way for far too long,
I clung onto something that was so wrong,
But I eventually got strong and told him to go,
Even though I was happy to see the back of him my tears did flow.
I didn’t know how to by myself,
But I knew that I had to survive for the sake of my own health,
As time went by I became able to cope,
No longer was I at the end of my rope.
Then I met a wonderful guy,
Who showed me the world and gave me the sky,
I think that all my pain was worth it in the end,
As it led me down the path to meeting my best friend.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-05 11:57:53]
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by krisseee on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:12:40 PM AEST
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i don't want people to think that we have some kind of secret pact between us to compliment eachother's writing, we don't..
But, once again, i really only have good to say about this one.
Plus the fact that i know EXACTLY what you are saying....
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by mdmorash on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:20:45 PM AEST
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| Wow, just...wow. |
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:00:42 PM AEST
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| Beautiul and I'm glad to hear some one so happy. peace be with you |
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:23:37 AM AEST
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I'm very happy u survived it all and found happiness as happiness is rare in our world today.
Good write as it tells the world that happiness can be found.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:55:10 AM AEST
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This is beautiful and so true, to be not alone, and in misery, and then to come out, sacrifice and then to fing. Wonderful write, and make me smile.
Thank you for aharing this heart felt write.
Chris |
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:41:09 AM AEST
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| I'm so glad you found happiness, many people dont. Good job. |
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Re: Worthwhile Pain
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by SweetRhythm on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:23:52 AM AEST
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auh whoa lovely what a sweet ending! good read, excellent write & enjoyed the way it developed. look forward to more of your stuff.
ps. great signature
corinna |
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