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TILL THE TIME WE MEET AGAIN!
Contributed by
frejya
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:49:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Till the time we meet again
I cannot like I could
pour my love like rain
and I know I really should
calm my lonely heart
from this painfull urge to free
this urge to feel some you, some me
as lives the sad truth that we're apart
I need you close to pull out this dart
from my terribly lonely heart
shall I not call God unfair?
I miss you here, you miss me there
and like rivers of tears deposit some silt
this pain increases layer by layer
times with you I learn I do
a lot of me plus a lot of you
till the time we meet agian
these nights and these days
till the time we meet again
remember this love waitin for u....
.......always
TILL THE TIME WE MEET AGAIN!
Copyright ©
frejya
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2004-06-05 10:49:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: TILL THE TIME WE MEET AGAIN!
(User Rating: 1 ) by movax on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:35:28 AM AEST (User
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You evoke really well the longing for your loved one. Great poem |
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Re: TILL THE TIME WE MEET AGAIN!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:46:12 PM AEST (User
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"I need you close to pull out this dart
from my terribly lonely heart
shall I not call God unfair?
I miss you here, you miss me there"
I really like this and I can relate...
Isn't distance in love one of the worst things in the world?
Good stuff...
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Re: TILL THE TIME WE MEET AGAIN!
(User Rating: 1 ) by SpecialK on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 09:50:33 PM AEST (User
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Whoever this is for, better love you. Great job |
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