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Hard to speak
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:18:44 AM in AEST
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I'm wondering if this is right
Inside I'm happy
But on the outside i'm ready to take flight
Out of my life for so long
Now wanting to be apart
Apart of somthing that has gona so wrong
Would it have been different if you were there?
There as i grew up
Or would things have been the same
Why do I feel like this?
I should be happy
But how can I be
It was you that wasn't there
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Re: Hard to speak
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:02:26 AM AEST
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To grow up without your father in your life must have been terrible for you. This is a very emotional write.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Hard to speak
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by Britty on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:02:43 AM AEST
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| hey...good poem...i no how u feel...i never really got to meet my dad..so lucky u...keep up the good work!! |
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Re: Hard to speak
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by Archie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:17:15 PM AEST
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| I hope the meeting between you and him went well. forgiveness is often hard to express and give. Pain can often cloud us and keep us into maturing into who we are supposed to be. You have something I do not have; both my parents are dead. Take the time to get to know your dad discuss why he wasn't there and give him the chance to be there for you now. I would like to read more poetry by you not just to post comments like the ones I have posted so far but to also congratulate you when things go well. I hope I get the chance to do so. --Archie |
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Re: Hard to speak
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by Elena on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:30:16 PM AEST
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Coming from one of the Rugby capitals of the world, I wish our Rugby players had this much heart... I hope it really goes well for you and for him.
E |
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Re: Hard to speak
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:48:28 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
I can imagene it took some king of courage to meet him.
Sad but a masterppeice!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Hard to speak
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:06:07 AM AEST
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wow, this is really sad...I like it however it had yu feelings in it...and it was very much filled with truth I liked it a lot...
much love
your good friend,
Dani
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