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THE AMOUNT I LOVE YOU
Contributed by
frejya
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:42:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The amount I love you I dunno
Surely it lives on you and I live on it
Hide you inside me from away the world
Found many green corners for us to sit
The amount I'm eager I dunno
Still shining in the light of wait lit
The amount I love you I dunno
Surely I can give it till I break
Though I need that love of yours
Any way you like, even fake
The amount I miss you I dunno
Any shame for the tears you make?
The amount I love you I dunno
Surely like in a cage of my own
Now I feel you lacking even inside pain
From my eyes, my world you've never known
The amount I'm hurt I dunno
Love - a sweet tease for that whispered moan
The amount I love you I dunno
Surely it haunts me everywhere
I need no examples of the bygones
Repeating is a devil I find not fair
The amount I'm left with I dunno
Renaissances on the earth till you are there.
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frejya
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2004-06-05 09:42:30]
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Re: THE AMOUNT I LOVE YOU
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by Archie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:48:24 AM AEST
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| I think this is an apt poem. You seem to be avoiding a question asked you about love by saying you are willing to stay in a hurtful relationship. I am just assuming here ofcourse. |
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Re: THE AMOUNT I LOVE YOU
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:30:31 AM AEST
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This is good for a first poem, look forward to hearing more from you
takecare
Pixie xx |
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