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Take Me There
Contributed by
Theo_stretner
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:26:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take me there,
Take me to the place
Where the people dont stare
Where the people have no face,
Where the trees never grow,
Where the sun never rises,
Take me to show,
Take where there are no suprises,
Let me sit there,
And wallow in my sadness
Let me sit on a chair,
And let me realize my badness,
Take my hand,
I will take yours,
Take my life
I will hold the door.
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Theo_stretner
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2004-06-05 09:26:56]
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Re: Take Me There
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:46:58 AM AEST
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| nice write. |
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Re: Take Me There
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:24:04 PM AEST
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wow, that was very powerful, iys weird though how anyone could want to be in such a dark place...lol but yeah that wasa great write...I loved the feeling and expressions used in it...it was great...
read and comment my stuff if you want...I'd like to get your opinion...lol
much love,
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Re: Take Me There
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by SweetRhythm on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:07:58 AM AEST
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Intresting write, I liked the way it all flowed together. It's very intriging! Though it was quite dark & negative so I hope your spirits pick up, but excellent write for sure!
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Re: Take Me There
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:29:08 PM AEST
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That was very darkly serene
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