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Contributed by hot_topic on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

there i sit in the gangsta area of detroit
some guy comes up and tries to start a fight
i had my gun with me just in case
like a flash of lightning
everything went black.
some ppl say that he got my gun and shot me
but everything is so dark and i can't see a thing except for flashes of fire
surrounding me all over.
my life is over
there isn't any turn backs now
i still hear him cussing in my ear
with his middle finger right by my eye
just one push of the trigger......
and everything went black.
maybe ppl don't want me in this dark world after all
all that matters, is that i hope their happy
cause im already gone.

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Re: gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:27:58 AM AEST
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people like to assume they know everything. and that they are always right and they like to compare things and especially people. i suggest you get over what other people think because other people will always be there doing what people do, be stupid. i have yet to get over it and its only causing me grief.

you project an image and people attack that image saying theirs is better. well who cares about their opinions, they are wrong anyway for not even caring to get the truth. but dont always shun what you hear or youll just live in denial and that is sometimes worse.

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