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Love Cadet
Contributed by
secretwind
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:56:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You were talking to me
but I wasn't listening
you were saying something
a warning
about the fall,
I thought I was in love
never seen the danger
only wanted to be
deep in love
never knew
I was on the edge
on the wall,
When the pain came
and the blood started to flow
I get this strange feeling
I should have known
what was that you were saying
about the fall?
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secretwind
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2004-06-05 02:56:55]
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Re: Love Cadet
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:00:37 AM AEST
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| its not the fall, but the sudden stop..... atleast for me it was. good poem. A+++ good imagery |
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Re: Love Cadet
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:02:40 AM AEST
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I loved it and like the first comment take it from him he writes good stuff...lol anyways yeah I liked it a lot...keep it up and keep it coming....
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Re: Love Cadet
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:07:12 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love Cadet
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:02:55 AM AEST
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Very different write.......interesting thought provoking for me too!
Listening is so hard to do.......and then you realize........it's just too late!
Sorry......I felt for you while I read this.
love
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Re: Love Cadet
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:45:33 PM AEST
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poetic soliloquy, the feelings your write make this poem breathe, truely wonderful:)
hugs n' love nessa
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