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Day 1
Contributed by
Froggy
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:12:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The day begins,
I hold you in my arms,
The Day ends,
Where did i go wrong?
I know what i said,
I know what i did,
I made plans to not be there,
On the one night you need me most.
Realize what i did,
Rode fast through the dark.
To make it better,
To take back my bad remark.
Sitting at your house,
Watching you on the couch,
Feeling you pain,
Your life is so Mundane.
Hold you so tight,
I'll make the promise to you,
Your are my life,
I'll always bee there when you cry,
So i tell you to believe,
By your side through and through
I promise to never leave,
You'll be in my arms on Day 2.
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2004-06-05 02:12:01]
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Re: Day 1
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:28:39 AM AEST
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wow that was great...I loved it...very emotional, and nicely writtem...now on to DAY 2!!!! lol I loved it.....keep it up keep it coming....
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Re: Day 1
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:57:12 AM AEST
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| Okay |
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Re: Day 1
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:48:17 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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