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when will tomorrow break today

Contributed by rightwingbrknwing on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I dreamed last night of you, summed up all the times you've put me through. We were in a field of orange and green, and your head was resting on me, then my eyes saw somthing my heart did not want to see, it was reality, there was no you and me only you or me, seperatly, love. Love the way you made me feel loved the fact for a second i could pretend love was real, real and lived through you, woke up and broke into tears, all day it's haunting me, and now I wish that i could be back in that dream cuz it sure seems better then crying on a bench everyday, everyday....one day, one day I'll be back to sleep and love you, love to live. Please again ignore me, because I love to lye down pretending I can't hear them shouting out to me, why, why is tomorrow going to be waiting like today why can't tomorrow be another day, today, today has lasted way too long way too long for me to breath, let me take another breath before you choke me again.




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Re: when will tomorrow break today (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:21:23 AM AEST
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WOW, WOW, WOW, great song...I really like the way you put your words together...I hope you keep writing, and keep it coming, I'd really like to read some more...lol but yeah keep it up great write...
rea dand comment some of my stuff if you want...
Dani


Re: when will tomorrow break today (User Rating: 1 )
by rightwingbrknwing on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 08:31:06 AM AEST
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greatly apreciated, thank you very much, and yes i will read some of your stuff




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