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can i hold you one more time?
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:37:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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can i watch you
one more time
as you dress
and brush your hair
and if i should weep
as it all falls apart
just pretend that i'm not there
can i hold you
one more time
breath you in
and hold you in my lungs
like a final breath left to linger
touch every part of you
one last time
so that my fingertips will always remember
can i kiss you
one more time
please understand it won't mean a thing
just a memory to take with me
and recall when the night finds me alone
can i tell you i love you
one more time
so that my lips will have a chance
to say goodbye
to the words i'll never speak again
so that my heart will have a chance
to mourn over
a truth i'll never know again
can i walk away from this
just so i'll never hurt you again
do i have that strength?
yes, but only if
i never look back again
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Cancer
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2004-06-04 23:37:03]
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Re: can i hold you one more time?
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:53:37 PM AEST
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Sad but really written well.
Hang tuff.
Luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: can i hold you one more time?
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by FiggySue on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:50:41 AM AEST
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Only someone who has truly been in love,
can write such beauty.
Your words are very touching, and very easy for myself to relate. Keep up the GREAT work. |
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Re: can i hold you one more time?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:16:01 AM AEST
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wow, I know what you mean, I have wrutten much good bye poetry...and it is sooooo hard to say good bye to someone you love....and bear it...I dont like saying goodbye...I dotn know I dotn know anyone who does...but yeah anyways....great write...I loved it...so much emotion was put into it...I felt as tho I was reliving my expierences again...which was the sucky part but you have to remember to let go....
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think
Dani |
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Re: can i hold you one more time?
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:30:29 AM AEST
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Very sad, but very beautiful also, well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: can i hold you one more time?
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:53:36 AM AEST
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| very sad. it's good though, go you. |
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Re: can i hold you one more time?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:11:52 AM AEST
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| so profoundly beautiful, your words touch me deep inside, stunning... |
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