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You BReaK MY HeaRT....
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:15:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The days she counted in quiet inner desperation
She couldn't wait to see him again
Imagining his smile, the way he smelled
The desirable taste of his beautiful lips.
The minutes before their meeting
She sat on the plane and almost cried
Something inside her was changing, rearranging
It felt like he was making her whole inside.
Looking around for the familiar face
Of the man she always dreamed about
She could finally understand the longing, burning
Of his strong embrace around her neck.
She smiled, he smiled, they hesitated
A tear rolled down her cheek to her chin
They talked as he drove and she laughed
It felt so good to be with him.
As each day went on she grew sadder
She learned recently the bad news
He doesnt love her, but someone else
Someone she had grew to like, someone she knew.
Everyday she was there she was forced to witness
The affections she had always desired
And hopelessly held down the jealousy
Crying her sorrows into a pillow alone each night.
Ready to be back home and alone once more
Making everything so much easier to endure
Life once again dull and unexciting
But never again will she feel this pain; unsure.
"You break my heart into a thousand pieces,
And you say it's cause I deserve better?"
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:12:13 PM AEST
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ahh this is so sad... I know what its like to have your heart broken while maybe not the same intensity as the pain you are feeling (felt?) I can still definitely empathize with you. In any case this was a great poem and if u ever wanna talk feel free to drop me a line.
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by FiggySue on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:03:26 AM AEST
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| I'v e been there, I started dating a guy when I was 13, it stayed that way till I was 20. We moved in together and about 6 mths later he cheated on me with his bf girl, I had suspected it, but he assured me I was his one and only. Too bad he hasn't read your poem maybe he might get a taste of how a breaking heart feels.. Your poem is beautiful, keep it up!! |
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by positivelypurple on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:29:00 AM AEST
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| I can relate big time! I just went through something like this...Very nicely written...an excellent read! |
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by MilitaryPrince on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:37:26 AM AEST
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A very emotional write!
"You break my heart into a thousand pieces,
And you say it's cause I deserve better?"
Words heard all too often...I have felt what you said with this poem, check out "It's when" i think you might like it...I liked this one a lot
Keep that pen flowing! |
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:05:03 PM AEST
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omg this is so realistically beautiful, the last 3 stanzas especially, been there so many times.
Always,
Vanessa |
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by exiled on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:13:50 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem and think you hit it right on the head of how a broken heart feels. Yet, I can't help but to be curious if this isn't just a poem but a story? Well, anyway take it easy and keep em coming.
Sam |
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Re: You BReaK MY HeaRT....
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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ohhh lindsey, my heart goes out to you, i know how much you love him, theres nothing like being dumped for another to make the world tilt on its axis, i hope you find love again, it was his loss not yours, although i bet you dont see that yet, you will sweetie, hang in there and im here if you need me:) hugs n' love nessa
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