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THe PLaCe WHeRe SHe iS aLLoWeD To SMiLe

Contributed by xslashxprettyxskinx on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

She closed her bright sapphire eyes
And imagined the greenest of fields
Covered in yellow flowers and rain
As she drifted off to Neverland to play.

Over the marshmellow clouds
And the mirages of her childhood
Mirrored blurry beneath her toes
As the wind sweptpast her pudgy cheeks.

A smile permanently graced her untouched angelic face
And she giggled uncontrollably from pure excitement
Tasting the wonderful aromas of the sky
As her dream mountains and trees came into view.

She could see the valley and all the other children
And she couldnt control the happiness she had always longed for
Never wanting to go back to her cold, dark home
As she vowed this place was made just for her.

Feet finally touched ground as the dirt held her there
And she knew in her heart she was home
This is where she belonged and she was never going back
As she ran where she could smile and play.

Life for her was always difficult
Until she found this Neverland
Now she's allowed to smile
Now she's allowed to play
And she deserves this wonderful place!

Copyright © xslashxprettyxskinx ... [ 2004-06-04 17:35:51]
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Re: THe PLaCe WHeRe SHe iS aLLoWeD To SMiLe (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:02:05 PM AEST
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wow! very vivid and descriptive. Amazing poem. really enjoyed

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