|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I Might Never Know
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:41:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
I've been sitting here thinking about what happened between us
I still can't figure it out
I still don't know why it didn't work out.
Do you know?
If you do then please tell me because I'm dieing inside thinking it was all my fault
Did you leave because of me?
Was I so horrible that you couldn't stand it?
Or was it something else?
I might never know
But I will always wonder.
Copyright ©
jishes_4_ever
... [
2004-06-04 15:41:28]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I Might Never Know
(User Rating: 1 )
by drinkWATER on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:03:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
your comment on your poem was painfull girl/boy a little bloody self-pitying.
anyways I was deeply connected to your poem it drew me in with its bleeding heart, its open sore of raw confusion and I relate totally relate to this because I have felt the same not just in relationships with members of the opposite sex but of cource as happens with all of us in all parts of the world in all cultures,WHATVER, confusion rears its ugly head is what Im trying to say. A beautiful thing this poem. to be revered for its simplicity in a heart confused and poisoned with the elapsing of time. gota go. very good |
|
|
Re: I Might Never Know
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:06:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nothing you write is "no good" when it comes from the heart...it's good. I read a sense of there being no closure...and a need for some. I recently had that happen ...and happily it is coming for me...along with and opening I didn't expect. But I enjoyed the write. Never say your writing is not good....please? |
|
|
Re: I Might Never Know
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:29:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I am sorry for saying my poem was no good. That is just what I think of my work sometimes. I'm sure everyone must think they're work is bad every once in a while but I will no longer put my poems are no good as a comment. Thank you *those you have* for saying you liked my poem. |
|
|
Re: I Might Never Know
(User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:06:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I thought your poem was lovely, very strong.... I enjoyed keep it up..
Hugs
*LoVeLy* |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
