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Broken
Contributed by
corbin286
on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 07:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Broken hearts broken dreams.
Broken love broken faith.
Lies,corruption deciet.
I must admit defeat.
Crying I hold my broken heart.
Trying to piece it together.
Screaming I want to die.
Slashing I feel better.
Bleeding I need you.
Copyright ©
corbin286
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2002-10-14 07:50:00]
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Re: Broken
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 07:13:08 AM AEST
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| this is really powerful - i love the simplicity and emotive language you use. and trust me, you're not the only one who feels this way. great poem, keep writing xxx |
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Re: Broken
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by corbin286 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 08:33:39 AM AEST
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| hey thanx how did u like my other poetry? ttyl |
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Re: Broken
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 01:43:10 PM AEST
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| Short and well, not so sweet, and to the point. I really liked it. It showed great emotions. |
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Re: Broken
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by corbin286 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 08:15:26 PM AEST
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corbin286,
nicejob. i really liked it alot!
g2g,
mom want,s me to wash the dishes .
love ya 4 ever,
-C-A-C |
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