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HELP
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I can't take this anymore
i've got to get out of this place
i'm seeing you everywhere
every window holds your face
every car i see is yours
everything I do reminds me of you
every poem I write is about you
am I obssessed?
I can't get you out of my head
i'm missing you so much it's driving me crazy
i'm loosing my mind
going insane
i can't let go of you
it's just too much
and I don't thing it's ever gonna end
Somebody, anybody
HELP
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2004-06-04 14:29:59]
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Re: HELP
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:53:56 PM AEST
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| I CAN RELATE TO THIS WORK VERY WELL DONE.... |
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Re: HELP
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:09:33 PM AEST
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| I liked it... though your diction is a bit too conversational for my preference. I did like how you referred to this mystery person though. |
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