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Pink Lemonade
Contributed by
Ina
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:35:49 PM in AEST
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Sinking into the marble seat
I am on a velvet pillow of eternal comfort
I exist only to be free of the burden
like a mother giving up her milk.
I let go of the trigger
and every muscle runs screaming pleasure
looking down
the liquid is mixing
like oil
with pure crystal water
Its purple!
No, no, I am simply drunk.
It is the color of
Pink lemonade
And little lemon drops.
It has stopped…
To continue again,
This time faster!
Speeding!
Ahead of time!
Ahead of me!
As it ends I start feeling my toes again,
and I want to lay my head on my lap.
And sleep,
but it’s too cold…
I always have to pee after sex.
Copyright ©
Ina
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2004-06-04 12:35:49]
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:01:40 PM AEST
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lololol me too,
good poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by reilt on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:20:32 PM AEST
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| what can i say...fantastic poem |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:23:21 PM AEST
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LMAO...and thats all I can say
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by afterdark on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:33:08 PM AEST
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| definitly a fav of mine.......... |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:37:05 PM AEST
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Lmao.....I thought I as alone in this......
Phew!!
Jenni |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by Ina on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:54:58 PM AEST
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| Thank you all so so so very much. I am so glad you can feel my fascination! |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:01:54 AM AEST
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Wonderful write
Whisper |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by youlied on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:21:11 PM AEST
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| This is a good one, your poems are all great... |
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Re: Pink Lemonade
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by Cancer on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:12:44 PM AEST
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your perspective and descriptions are incredibly unique. you can take the most common things and explain them in such a manner that they almost feel unfamiliar.
as with all your others, this scrawl just "blew me away", for lack of a more original term of praise.
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