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Pinprick
Contributed by
Ina
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:34:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I breathe
hollow chunks of air
holding no shadows
I am afraid
of everything
oh god everything!
and my toe-nails
scratch against the floor
Zgrrit
Zgrrit
Zgrrit
the skin on my thigh
is so pale, reflecting
the rain
like plump
cockroaches
up my thigh
and into the hole; suffocated
Copyright ©
Ina
... [
2004-06-04 12:34:09]
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Re: Pinprick
(User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:19:00 PM AEST
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| oh wow...another wonderful poem from you ina...i loved it...and i like the sound you invented...you've created another great poem |
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Re: Pinprick
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by Black13 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:20:32 PM AEST
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I have no idea what exactly you were talking about.
Lol.
I liked it though.
Interestingly worded. |
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