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My Last Dream
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:55:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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sweetness of breath.
blood stained hands.
hold me close.
i shut my eyes to reality,
curl up into a ball.
tightly woven together,
floral swirls of time.
pain unbearable.
i wrap myself in your presence,
crying through the lust.
the fuzzy warmth of confusion.
taken my last dream,
and opened it to the public.
eyes stare at me,
through clouds of pity
and desire.
how do i thank you?
pools of chilled blood
and semen
raw as can be
i've been used up
i've been let down
now i drown in death
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MDodgen
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2004-06-04 11:55:35]
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Re: My Last Dream
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:33:24 PM AEST
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| oh *muah* thats good! brilliant! |
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Re: My Last Dream
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:11:56 PM AEST
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| good imagery. nicely written portrays your emotions well |
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