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Rainstorm
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:14:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The rain drops fall over a gray misty land
Feel the soft splattering of water engulf you
The purple clouds wrap their arms around you,
Feel the soothing touch of the storm.
Feel the grass as you fall
So soft, so wet against bare skin
Feel the tears you cry inside
Spill out upon the Earth’s soft carpet
The purple swirls above reach down
As Mother Earth wipes away your tears
Feel her comforting arms holding you
Curl up and listen to her soothing lullaby
As the thunder rolls and lightening cracks
Listen to nature’s song
Feel the harmony flowing through the air
Feel the wind racing playfully, dancing it’s own dance
The subtle sprinkling rain is the background music,
The thunder and lightening the symbols and drums
Close your eyes, take a deep breath
Smell the fresh scent of wet Earth
Feel your last tear fall slowly to the dirt
Feel your breathing start to slow
And die there peacefully, in the arms
of the only mother you’ve ever known.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
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2004-06-04 11:14:50]
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Re: Rainstorm
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by jaeann on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:55:10 PM AEST
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| wow.........that was an amazing write....the imagery is ethereal.....it mimics memories from the other side..... |
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Re: Rainstorm
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:54:46 PM AEST
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omg lisa this is the most incredible poem i've read in a looong time.. and im not just saying that.. as i told u i haven't been on here much at all, and this is the only recent one of urs i've read lately, but even still i couldnt resist commenting.. u have an awesome talent - never give up writing!!!
lots of love, charlotte xxx |
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