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broken dreams and falling hope
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:48:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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broken dreams
and falling hope
go hand-in-hand
with life.
If you could fly away,
far away from here
could you?
If you could leave it all behind,
forget all of the pain
would you?
Broken dreams
and falling hope
go hand-in-hand
with life
close your eyes for just a moment
imagine and believe:
fly away from here
far away from this
fix the breaks
and catch the hope
leave the pain behind.
broken dreams
and falling hope
go hand-in-hand
with life.
reallity now sets in
If you could fly away,
far away from here
could you?
If you could leave it all behind,
forget all of the pain
would you?
even if you had to leave
the few good things in life?
I say it's worth the sacrafice.
too bad it's all a dream
so i'll close my eyes,
and for a moment in time
i can leave this place
fix the breaks
and catch the hope
leave the pain behind
broken dreams
and falling hope
go hand-in-hand
with life.
i'd sleep forever if i could......
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2004-06-04 10:48:55]
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Re: broken dreams and falling hope
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:37:44 AM AEST
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Wow, i love this. Very emotional. And yes, i would. I agree w/ you completely, and i'd sleep forever if i could too. This piece is beautiful, i love the "Broken dreams and falling hope go hand-in-hand with life" Amazing line. You have great talent, keep it coming!
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Re: broken dreams and falling hope
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by blueheart on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:34:38 PM AEST
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i'd sleep forever if i could......
I would too.
I agree with you all the way. A beautifully crafted poem with overwhelming emotions. Very nice.
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