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My secret pain
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krisseee
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:44:35 AM in AEST
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so much anger, it burns inside,
pain and hurt, covered up by pride,
what seeing you suffering like this does to me, i have to hide,
for your sake alone, i won´t let myself slide.
you asked me how i´m doing, i said Fine, i lied,
a river built up behind my eyes, from where i´ve never cried,
can´t get you to wake up, how many times i´ve tried,
but i won´t give up, i love you, no matter what,
i´m by your side.
Every time i close my eyes, your crying is amplified,
that´s why i´m afraid to sleep, live every day red eyed,
wish i could put this pain in a bottle, throw it to sea, get washed away wit the tide,
i can´t hide from the world any more that a piece of me has died.
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Re: My secret pain
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:56:04 AM AEST
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Wonderful job. Keep up the good work, and I hope to hear more. I liked this poem a lot. You did a very good job expressing your feelings. I liked it!
~Stace~ |
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Re: My secret pain
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:11:47 AM AEST
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| beautifully heart aching, God bless you. |
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Re: My secret pain
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by Luinil on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:50:02 AM AEST
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| it's difficult to have the same rhyme all the way through a poem and i'm really impressed... you did a beautiful job! |
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Re: My secret pain
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:13:41 AM AEST
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| you did a really good job of expressing your emotions with this poem. keep up the good work -david |
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Re: My secret pain
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:42:55 AM AEST
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Wonderfully expressed, glad to see you are still here Kris,
keep up the great work, i love your style
pixie xx |
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