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~This place of mine~
Contributed by
jackee_line
on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 06:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When I feel the need to escape
and when this need is strong.
This place of mine so beautiful
nothing compares to it , it is wonderful.
The sun is always shinning, the sky forever blue,
it's like a new beginning, like I always knew.
No need to seek approuval, no need to seek justice,
no one there but me, is where I want to be.
No need to be pulled in I go there willingly.
Nothing matters here,
no one there to hurt you, there's no need to fear.
Only love exists here, beauty all around,
is where I want to go when I'm feeling down.
No need to hide my feelings, no need to feel ashamed,
this place accepts me for who I am,there is no game.
I go deep inside this place, protected from the outside,
to think,mend and grow strong, to face yet again the world and it's realities. I will emerge from my place within, able to take it all in stride,
This place of mine, will never leave me,
because it's deep inside my heart and forever it will be.
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2002-10-14 06:50:00]
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Re: ~This place of mine~
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:55:23 AM AEST
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Lovely writing Jackee,
With very good writing you make this place sound wonderful!
I think I know where this place is, I'll be looking out for ya next time I'm there! Hehehe
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: ~This place of mine~
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:09:25 AM AEST
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Very well put, I have my own place also, it's my wife's heart, there is nothing but love there, Lovely write.
The Phantom |
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