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Not Sure Anymore
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:41:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Not sure what to think of you -
Now that I’ve taken off the blinkers
I see a totally different view
I’ve no idea how to feel anymore.
I’m lost in this emotional sea
Desperately floundering towards the shore
Every truth that I once knew
Has shattered into little pieces
And a new truth shines boldly through
Too many conflicting ideas appearing
And random thoughts are playing
In my head that needs clearing
I feel as though the core of my world
Has crumbled beneath my feet -
Like all my life I’ve been controlled
Every memory holds new meaning.
In this cold harsh light of the new day
I can’t tell which way my world is veering
MW 14.05.04
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evilfairy
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2004-06-04 01:41:40]
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Re: Not Sure Anymore
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:32:19 AM AEST
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Great name for the words that followed.
Confussion is coupling with the dawn of opening eyes. I hope you venture unskaved
and your hind-sight finds solid ground.
Remember the world is unfair. All we have is trust in ourselves. So trust in yourself, in your gut. And I will pray that you find your way.
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Re: Not Sure Anymore
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by Buggsy on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:34:25 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I've been writing a story along these lines. |
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