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I remember your eyes
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:38:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember your eyes.
God, you have dark eyes
They caught me unaware
What were you thinking of then?
I think I might have blushed
But I’m sure you didn’t see
How my breath caught
When I saw you look at me
I walked away that night
After trying to pretend
That you hadn’t raised my interest
And thus the story would end
But all those months later
To see you again was a surprise.
It hit me all over again
The unwritten message in your eyes
Watching you covertly
When I thought you couldn’t see
But the thing is the whole time
You were looking back at me
Too astonishing to believe
I’d finally found someone
Who could make the promise
That they might just be the one.
MW
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Re: I remember your eyes
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:53:00 AM AEST
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| very nice :) |
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Re: I remember your eyes
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:01:02 AM AEST
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Loved this one, great stuff
pixie xx |
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Re: I remember your eyes
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:42:50 AM AEST
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Eyes.........they can be so many different things.
Sometimes mystery, sometimes vulnerability, but always fascinating.
Nice work
steve |
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Re: I remember your eyes
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:15:43 AM AEST
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| amazing. this poem really touched me. -david |
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Re: I remember your eyes
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by fastpitchqt on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem, and they say that peoples eyes are a window to their soul, just might be in your case. Eyes are very mesmerizing and I have lost myself in them before, but ended in heartbreak sadly. |
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Re: I remember your eyes
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 01:37:23 PM AEST
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that was beautiful
my favorite stanza was
Watching you covertly
When I thought you couldn’t see
But the thing is the whole time
You were looking back at me
It made me think of all those other people who have caught my interest.
It was truely a beautiful write. |
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