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Need Improvements
Contributed by
Trisha
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I Just Deal With Things Differenty Than Others.
It May Not Be The Right Way I Know There's Room For Improvements. There's So Many Things About Myself I Need To Change. I Can Only Work On One Thing At A Time. When I Got It Figured Out I Doubt That Person It's Not Fair To Anyone. It's Just I'm Letting To Much Stuff In My Head At Onces. I Know It'll Prove Me Weak In My Own Head. Just Kick Scream And Cry Until I Can Reach The End To Start My New And Beautiful Beginning. In All Reality It's Not Gonna Happen. Take This Pain Away Take These Painful Thoughts Away For Once Give Me Truth.
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2004-06-04 00:02:28]
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Re: Need Improvements
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by blackmarker on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:03:49 AM AEST
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| I know these feelings.. good job |
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Re: Need Improvements
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by fbijedi on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:13:43 AM AEST
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| Great job! Very emotional, I know how it feels. Keep it up! |
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Re: Need Improvements
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by JT on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:24:36 AM AEST
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another interesting write. like the style
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