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My Life
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:04:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I Can't Let My Past Ruin Me.
I Can't Let Someone Else Let
My Past Ruin Me. What If?
Why Can't Anyone Else See?
Should It Even Matter?
It's My Life My Way My
Environment.
I Will Change It Would Be
Pointless To Change It
Would Be Pointless And
Worthless To Change
Someone Else.
I Realized Only I Can
Change How I Feel Or
What I Want In My Life.
My Life I Know What I
Want So What Better
Person To Make The
Changes To Achieve It
Than Me.
Copyright ©
Trisha
... [
2004-06-03 23:04:46]
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Re: My Life
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:07:28 PM AEST
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| very emotional write ,good job. |
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Re: My Life
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by wray on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:20:57 PM AEST
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I haven't read any of your other poems so I don't know if it's your style.. but I like how the caps emphasise the feel of this poem, the strength of the words, the strength of your realisations.
Meanwhile I thoroughly applaud you for the content - the things you've obviously learned about life seem pretty cliched when put into poetry but it's all true. It's Time We All Made Changes. =) |
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Re: My Life
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:27:39 PM AEST
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Very good thoughts.
Very true as we r responsible for ourselfs.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Life
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by JT on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:19:59 AM AEST
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good honest write. we are what we let ourselves be. keep it up
-jt- |
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Re: My Life
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:20:13 AM AEST
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| strong, very strong and right. All we can control in this world is ourselves. beautifully written. |
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Re: My Life
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:37:07 AM AEST
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well done, always be true to yourself:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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