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Slit my wrists
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the brand, so delicate, touches my skin
the light blue line faded amongst the ivory
carefully, so carefully, the tip sinks in
and a little push slides it in farther
with crimson agony spilling out
every thought in my mind is 'harder, push it harder'
sweat is forming at the corners of my palm
but i keep on going to the words of the song
and carefully, so carefully, i nudge the blade in
it slices my veins to spill my blood filled with sin
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2004-06-03 21:59:21]
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Re: Slit my wrists
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:24:51 PM AEST
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This is brilliantly writen and yes, I think it does speak for itself. I'm not one to judge as I do the very same myself and god how i've heard that "Deeper...a little deeper"
I hope you manage to restrain yourself from doing too much damage but cutting in itself can be so beautiful and the scars can be a work of art.
Good luck to you and I hope things get better. If you ever need to talk just PM me
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Slit my wrists
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:38:01 PM AEST
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| This speaks to me in a lot of ways. I know the pain and agony of this issue. But once you start it is very hard to stop! I know! |
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Re: Slit my wrists
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:45:54 AM AEST
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Please don't do that.
I can see that your hurt and emotional.
It's good to write about it ,but just don't do that ok?
by the way good write. |
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Re: Slit my wrists
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:47:26 AM AEST
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Your words spoke volumes to me also, as I know how hard it is to stop this, but I have managed it and I know that if I can then others can too, they just have to find that inner courage and strength, keep looking you will find it..... the poem was very hard hitting and desreves no less than 5/5
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Slit my wrists
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by CeruleanScreams on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:50:52 PM AEST
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| incredible description-- both of the act as well as the mentality. i can't tell you how many times i've heard those very words echoing in my head... isn't it ironic how carefully we cut, when the very slashing is destruction? (but so beautiful at the same time). btw, thanks for the comments on my poems |
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Re: Slit my wrists
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by oneteartofellpain on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:37:08 PM AEST
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| :0O just marvolous...great....job....bravo...[drinks]just beautiful :) |
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