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Just friends
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:44:58 PM in AEST
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As the door slams shut on our empty house
no words of love can escape my mouth
for all I feel is fear and pain
from living life in your blackened reign
you thought fills my heart and starts to destroy
as I realize quick I was just your toy
and all you had told me was just lies
but It wasnt enough to just make me cry
so what made you decide?where'd you get the nerve?
to maybe ***** me up, or give what I deserve
did you want to kill me off?or just corrupt my mind?
I think i used to know you,I thought you werent that kind
you really screwed me over, I thought we'd always be
together til the end, not just a horrid memory
you said you loved me once will you ever again?
or will we stay forever, painfully just "friends"
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Re: Just friends
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:53:42 PM AEST
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:: stares in awe::
thats the best poem! its so heart felt and strong, and rolls right off of your tongue!
props and kudos to you! awesome!
very nice!! keep em comin! |
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Re: Just friends
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:56:49 PM AEST
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This is fantastic, brilliantly written, beautiful and stong yet sad at the same time. I love the flow - the words...everything! Great write
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Just friends
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:23:59 PM AEST
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| I understand this one completely. I hope you havent taken the route i have. an excellent write. |
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Re: Just friends
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by swiftsouljah on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:36:47 PM AEST
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just..... *****..... sorry but i feel just like you feel in this poem... and all i can say is *****... great poem
wayne |
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Re: Just friends
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:41:44 PM AEST
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| WOW! I just can't express in words how great and wonderful that poem is! I mean it just is soooo good in soooo many ways! Excellent Job! |
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Re: Just friends
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:49:22 PM AEST
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Your words are so strong, so emotional - they just seems to pour from the soul
Really fantastic work - i felt every word |
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Re: Just friends
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:03:57 AM AEST
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Oh My, what a painful write. You think you know someone, and then find out you aren't even close!
I can relate to this one, indeed, I was married to a man for 14 years, and finally had to do the same thing you did.......but we did not remain friends. I had to cut all ties, or it would have gotten me completely down.
This was a great poem.....showing your true feelings, which is very hard at times.
I'm so terrible sorry this happened to you, but better to find out sooner than later!
Poetic hugs
consue |
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Re: Just friends
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by fastpitchqt on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:08:56 PM AEST
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| good poem!! I can somewhat relate to it. Except as much as I was hurt and my heart got broken we dont even talk. Supposably its all a big misunderstanding, but I havent had the guts to go figure it out yet. |
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