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Soon
Contributed by
SeanMcHaney
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:13:10 PM in AEST
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I listen as the wind dies its lonely death,
As the baby cries its dying breath.
I listen as the wolf howls to the moon,
And I know that death is coming soon.
I walk the streets alone at night,
Searching for a fires light.
I stand before an old mans tomb,
And I know that death is coming soon.
I see a girl so pretty and young,
She reminds me of a song once sung.
I long to make her swoon,
But I know that death is coming soon.
I look around me in a start,
As an icy hand grips my heart.
I look upon my impending doom,
Because death is coming soon.
Sean McHaney
4 June 2K4
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SeanMcHaney
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2004-06-03 20:13:10]
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Re: Soon
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:23:48 PM AEST
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Well I hope you're with us long enough to write more poetry.
A great write! Liked very much |
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Re: Soon
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:37:51 PM AEST
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Really sad but written well.
Hang tuff and don't give up.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Soon
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:14:37 AM AEST
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| HOLY RUSTED SCIONS YERF DAWG!!!!!!!!!!! This by far your absoulte best. |
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Re: Soon
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:41:43 PM AEST
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| I apologize that it has taken me so long to comment on your poetry. Indeed I was missing out on a well versed and skillful poet. This is an awesome write. |
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