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Mom
Contributed by
Colleen
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:03:31 PM in AEST
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I did everything for you
Yet I am someone you never knew
All you do is command and yell
Trying to make my life hell
Are you too afraid to listen to me?
To scared to find the person you ought to be?
Well shut up because I don't hear you anymore
I have forever shut this door
You closed your ears to me long ago
Not even bothering to pay the toll
Have you closed your heart too?
When all the while, I thought you were true
You told me you'd change
For a moment my heart was rearranged
But in a short while you were back to your old way
Not even in a minute's delay
I thought that I'd be happy again
But I guess my heart will never fully mend
All you ever do is lie
When I give a new start a try
Don't tell me I lie
And don't pretend you don't see me cry
I wasted my tears over you
I thought that we could work this through
But you are too deaf to hear my pain
Too blind to see this burning chain
You can't feel that my heart is sore
All because you just don't care anymore
Copyright ©
Colleen
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Re: Mom
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by nail-to-the-head on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:10:03 PM AEST
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a great write, i also fight with my mom alot, but never seem to write much about it. very emotional write, i feel like that sometimes. hope things can get better for you someday. keep it up.
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Re: Mom
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:19:46 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very sad even tho it's written well.
I'm sure there are many others out there that have the same problem. I can't comprehend a parent that want listen to their children. I know it happens this way tho.When my children were growing up they always brought their friends to my house 'cause they couldn't talk to their own parents. I was a sergate mother for many. Even today I get along better with tens etc. better than my own generation. I hope and pray that u find some inner peace. If ya need someone to listen, I'm here.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Mom
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:58:22 PM AEST
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| I only wish I had my mom around you will find out one day I know its tough to listen to what she tells you but its only for your own good I know that you prob. think not I did too untill I had kids of my own & I turned out just like her Thank Goodness! Good Luck! Christina |
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Re: Mom
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by adanawa on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:04:03 AM AEST
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| Very emotional I've felt like that before and Ii like the way you seem to put it all without calling her a ***** or anything like that---well done-----adanawa |
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