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Lost
Contributed by
kimi
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Lost in the darkness
I hope for a voice
To break the silence that
Erupts and
Surrounds me...
Silence that deafens me,
Scares me. A voice
To break the stillness,
To reassure me that
The world is still
There
That when I look back
It won’t have disappeared.
Copyright ©
kimi
... [
2004-06-03 19:17:13]
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Re: Lost
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:24:27 PM AEST
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| Excellent !! Think we all can understand this...Russ |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:38:22 PM AEST
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| Great one - it really evokes your emotions. I can definitely relate to it... I love it. Good job |
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Re: Lost
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:42:00 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful... i love the oxymoron of silence errupting and deafening. great write! |
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Re: Lost
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:49:27 PM AEST
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| Deep...keep writing |
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Re: Lost
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by JT on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:31:26 AM AEST
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| great write. very stirring |
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Re: Lost
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:57:31 AM AEST
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This voice says...........great work !!!
A few sentences and then it leaves you to ponder in silence
Wonderful
steve
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