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Kemm inti sabiha
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:53:51 PM in AEST
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What are these feelings in my heart?
When I thought there was nothing left for me
Light filters through the window above us
Disturbing two white doves cooing
Deserted farmhouse, our haven from the storm
Still shots, freeze frame, caught us
Soaking wet and hungry for each other
Lovers in an instant, recognition of the soul
Long lost in paradigm of life’s rhyme
Given up for dead, mute in the dusk
Until we found one another, tears in my eyes
You keep repeating – if only and what might have been
But that is not for us, only what we steal like crumbs
Accumulating minutes into a lifetime
Creating time and place – black and white movies
You play Jean-Paul Belmondo to my Bridgette Bardo
We find humor in all of this - keep upping the ante
Smart enough not to fall head over heals, yet so intrigued
What are the possibilities?
Dreams slither between us like some hot reptile
Adam and Eve and sins of the flesh
But life knocks its hard head into the dream
Shaking us back to reality and that sense that something is missing
I think it must be you
~~**~~
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-06-03 18:53:51]
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Re: Kemm inti sabiha
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:06:21 PM AEST
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| Nice write, and I know just what you mean. Peace.x |
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Re: Kemm inti sabiha
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:10:25 PM AEST
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this is beautiful.. you're words express your feelings really well... great job!
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Re: Kemm inti sabiha
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by Biker on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:12:31 PM AEST
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I wonder what mood you were in Merry, when you wrote this poem... and by the way...what does 'Kemm inti sabiha' means...sounds meditteranean....
Prosit hafna.... R r |
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Re: Kemm inti sabiha
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:04:51 AM AEST
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mm mmm..I found this to be sensuous, sinful and totally fantastic!! I dont think there is anyone who can express themselves quite like you can Gaille. Two lovers who know the score and the rules of the game.
Very VERY well done ;o)
Roses
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Re: Kemm inti sabiha
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by Stitch on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:09:12 AM AEST
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Only you can write words that make my face crumple like I am going to cry. Just overwhelming.
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Re: Kemm inti sabiha
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:10:14 PM AEST
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ohhh! so sweet and enchanting, gaille, ahh to live the dream....... hugs n' love sis, nessa
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