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nightmares
Contributed by
shorty_52
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:49:47 PM in AEST
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ripped to shreds
my heart for you
i loved you so much
i thought that you knew.
i though you loved me
cause that's what you said
why did you lie
and fill my heart with dread.
i cried for hours
all day
all night
why did you hurt me
was my only thought.
then i wake up
my pillow all wet
it was just a nightmare
so horrible
i just weped.
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Re: nightmares
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:44:11 PM AEST
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| that is a bad dream... your words are chosen really well and have a nice flow... good job |
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Re: nightmares
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:08:30 PM AEST
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It's wept!!!
Hope this isn't real. Good luck. |
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Re: nightmares
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:41:47 PM AEST
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| good keep up the good work. right on |
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Re: nightmares
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by movax on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:42:11 PM AEST
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| great poem. have strange nightmares as well, and yeah they're about death and negativity |
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