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its too late for me
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:43:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the hour of hours
the days of all days
my murderer was found
in ultraviolent rays.
so in an instant he burned
never to kill
never to drink anymore blood
against someones will.
i was so happy
at this point you see
that i almost forgot
it was to late for me.
i'll be hunted next
so in silence i flee
away from this place
as soon as could be.
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2004-06-03 17:43:55]
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Re: its too late for me
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:46:09 PM AEST
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| oooh very dark, good rhyming. i really like this one... good job! |
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Re: its too late for me
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:08:52 PM AEST
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Wow, i like! I like the whole paranoia thing in the last stanza, very nice ending....i like the word choice and rhyming as well...simple yet very effective...great job!
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Re: its too late for me
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:20:49 PM AEST
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| Liked the poem lots. Cleverly written...Russ |
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Re: its too late for me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:07:39 AM AEST
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Your murderer was found..... so how did you write this dark poem? I like the creepiness of it. Eerie! :::::chills:::::: Nicely done!
Angel always...joni |
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