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This ain't The Streets
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:33:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Streets feel heavy under my feet,
But this ain't the streets,
Can't be arsed to get out of my seat,
Get the feeling that life is incomplete,
Yet somehow a treat,
So I walk my own path to the neat,sweet breakbeat,
Street sounds peaceful now at dawn,
Cos the gangsters' peace is born.
They're chilling with a Bud and a bud and Some porn.
Streets feel heavy under my feet,
But this ain't the streets,
As I make my way home through jungles of Concrete.
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alasdaircairns
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2004-06-03 17:33:31]
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Re: This ain't The Streets
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by Archie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:38:50 PM AEST
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| An interesting write |
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Re: This ain't The Streets
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:16:28 PM AEST
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Tried hard but couldn't find the swearing(ish)....perhaps i've become desensitised! lol
Anyway, i liked your poem....loved the flow of it. i know it's suposed to have a kind of a cruisy feel to it, but i could feel an underlying energy to it aswell... |
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