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Hypocrite

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:03:21 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I have had enough of this hypocritical crap,
i dont like what i have been hearing
I feel my skin about to unwrap,
and everyone around me is sneering.

I'm in a ring of unwanted fire,
With everyone spitting their own flames,
Around everyones necks I've wrapped a wire,
I'm no longer playing any games.

I can no longer deal with your unwanted lying,
It's just getting so damn old,
Your depressed but your not even trying,
Your starting to get to frigid and cold.

Your eyes are closed
your wrists are bleeding
your wounds are exposed,
We have already seen where this is leading

You have seen where this mess has gone
We have headed different ways
And i have withdrawn
You seem to be lost for days.

No one feels bad for you
I hate what you've done
Find some one else you can screw
in the head.

But you don't seem to realize that you have
screwed youself in the head and this time
no one will be there to pick up your pieces




Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-06-03 16:03:21]
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Re: Hypocrite (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:29:43 PM AEST
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Intriguing and well-written.
I liked these lines:

"I'm in a ring of unwanted fire,
With everyone spitting their own flames,"

Very good.
Thanks for sharing.


Re: Hypocrite (User Rating: 1 )
by adanawa on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:25:42 AM AEST
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Very nice alot of emotion in it I can relete tpo some of it I hope all goes well in the end ---adanawa


Re: Hypocrite (User Rating: 1 )
by Minerrva on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:28:05 PM AEST
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I can totally relate. My best bud sank into a self-imposed depression. I was really angry at her and I didn't want anything to do with her for quite some time.




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