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Life Of A Teddy Bear
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:07:40 AM in AEST
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Here I sit upon my window sill,
Just as every day I have so much time to kill,
I wish that someone would notice me today,
Pay me attention and ask me to play.
It seems that no-one wants a battered old teddy,
Who is here at hand and is always ready,
Ready to let loose and have some fun,
All I want is a friend , not a few just the one.
I long to be cuddled and shown some affection,
For someone to compliment on my fury complexion,
I’m not asking for a lot out of life,
Maybe to fall in love and find myself a wife.
For too long have I sat waited,
But no longer will my feelings stay hesitated,
I am going to shout them from the roof,
If they want to see my feelings I’ll give them proof.
I shall let my tears roll down my face,
As I sit up here in my lonely place,
Then maybe just maybe someone will care,
And show interest in the life of a Teddy Bear.
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pixie
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2004-06-03 11:07:40]
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:32:03 AM AEST
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| cute poem, well written. i loved the topic of this one. good job. |
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:56:52 PM AEST
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awwwwwwww
very good imagery and it tugs at the heart strings.
Nicely done. |
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:58:52 PM AEST
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| Thats a really cute kind of poem to write, i like the meaning behind it, :) Thanks for all your comments, it means alot to me. I like your poetry. |
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:05:51 PM AEST
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wow...what a cleverly creative poem.your works are always so original. a true sign of talent.keep writing.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:02:06 AM AEST
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You've done an excellent job here Pixie
Very creative and well delievered. I could view it as the teddy bears friend and sadly feeling alone for him. Great work. |
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by Seans_Girl on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:19:50 PM AEST
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| Very cute poem. I won't ever be able to look at my stuffed animals the same. lol good job. |
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Re: Life Of A Teddy Bear
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:41:24 PM AEST
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| very creative and well written... you did a nice job of bringing the teddy bear to life.. AMI JO |
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