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Skin Deep
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:05:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you b***h.
you cry.
you whine.
you beg.
i'm not yours to control.
the river plunges on,
the trees shoot down.
the mind grows numb.
after years of abuse,
you finally scream.
but no one's out there,
you're all by yourself.
faint traces of blood,
appear on the
cold mable floors.
a rape just like yours.
your heart is so soft,
i mold it to fit.
a murmer carries on the wind,
i slap it to cease.
no one is right,
the lies sink in.
honesty is only skin deep.
i lift the razor
and shed my skin.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
... [
2004-06-03 11:05:53]
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Re: Skin Deep
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:08:37 AM AEST
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wow this is dark,
brialliantly written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Skin Deep
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:00:47 PM AEST
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interesting. very good. keep it up.
~allyson~
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Re: Skin Deep
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by Britty on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:59:11 PM AEST
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| WOW...im so here for ya...i liked that alot!! keep it up hun!! |
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Re: Skin Deep
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by venkat on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:14:25 AM AEST
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| my heart melts down. venkat |
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Re: Skin Deep
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by Naughtygurl on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:46:56 PM AEST
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| My friend britty does not know anything about suicide.... she cutt herself shaving and said she did it on purpose.... I have six scars on my wrists, And it felt right at the time, but now i'm addicted.... I just havn't done it because I promised my Boyfriend i wouldn't ...so I relate to your poem.... I hope things get better.... I'm here for you.... Great poem. |
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