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Dust
Contributed by
MDodgen
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:52:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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a sly glance
a wicked smile
your stomach flips
my insides twirl
hitting
hurting
clenching
squeezing
why don't you listen?
why don't you care?
i'll always be here
my heart on the floor
crumbled to dust
ashes are thrown
hate is formed
love is lost
forever and more.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-03 10:52:16]
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Re: Dust
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:54:15 AM AEST
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Good poem, expressed well,
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Dust
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:04:10 AM AEST
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I hear ya my friend,
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Dust
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by venkat on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:05:12 AM AEST
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| God....I can understand you:-) venkat |
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