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Estrella
Contributed by
inertia
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:30:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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there's a light across the way
endless vigilance
keeps me humble
circum-standing,
on this sickle-cell-carousel
you burn my star down
i'm only bent
i'm not broken
you burn my star down
twice as bright
luminous light,
beats and beckons me
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inertia
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2004-06-03 08:30:20]
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Re: Estrella
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by apollo on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:04:37 AM AEST
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short and sweet. nothing but amazing. this has got me thinking.
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Re: Estrella
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:10:25 PM AEST
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I like the way you attacked the sense of failing strength via these lines;
"circum-standing,
on this sickle-cell-carousel"
Very expressive and original.
I like it. |
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