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with nor love nor friend
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:53:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Silent heart,
Like silent trees,
A love that there,
Yet no one sees,
A toying heart,
A worthless tease,
A begging man on hands or knees,
A life to live,
Will come to an end,
Before it sees a twist or bend,
A longing passion to death we’ll send,
Living this life,
With nor love nor friend
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2004-06-03 03:53:16]
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Re: with nor love nor friend
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:50:10 AM AEST
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How sad and lonely... A good write, though!
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Re: with nor love nor friend
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by apollo on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:21:26 AM AEST
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i really liked the flow to this poem. it was amazing really. its sad that love can be right there and you just can't see it. maybe that is how it is meant to be? (i know, i know, i wish love would just come out from hiding too. ) hopefully things work out, you have people here for you, and i want to read more of these amazing writings. so hang in there!
brandon |
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