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You and I
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:36:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You left me with
a silent kiss
You woke me gently
before the dawn
You reached my soul
with your warm glance
You made me believe
we had a chance...
I watched you leave
through my tears
I cried softly in
the morning light
I bared my heart and
gave to you
I believed in
what we had...
You heard my cry
within the dark
You met my dream
with a guiding light
You held my hand
through the storm
You gave me hope
for what's to come...
I see your face and
the fear that's there
I'll soar with you
to the next great height
I'll walk beside you
all the way
I want to show you
the reason you have to stay...
MW
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evilfairy
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2004-06-03 01:36:51]
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Re: You and I
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:45:19 AM AEST
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| very sweet. great poem. |
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Re: You and I
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:41:40 AM AEST
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great write very touching poem.
keep up the good work,looking forward to read more of your poems.:) |
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Re: You and I
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by morelikelyrics on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:22:34 PM AEST
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common pain, but so differently expressed...
yes, quite a piece... flowing and expressive...
well-written, as well... keep it up!
~MOrelikelyrics |
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