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Hiding
Contributed by
geykya
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:47:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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What you see before you, is not the real me.
This is an image of who I'm pretending to be.
I listen to the "right" music and wear the "right" clothes.
But what's inside my head is something nobody knows.
My brain tells me "they won't like the real you"
But my heart tells me I'm not being true.
Keeping up the image I try to portray,
keeps me busy night and day.
I'm always on my guard
Hoping they don't see through my act.
But deep down I want someone to see.
See through to my soul.
See the real me.
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geykya
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2004-06-02 23:47:32]
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Re: Hiding
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:56:33 PM AEST
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Jus cut loose and be free.
In this write I see a very beautifull person longing to be free.
Set yourself free and if people don't like it then it's their problem.
luv, huggs, freedom,
emy
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Re: Hiding
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:02:08 AM AEST
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Excellent work.
keeping up that kind of image must be hard - i hope you give the real you a chance to shine - you'd probably be surprised by how well you do out there.....but you will never know if you don't let go of this act |
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