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When can I see you again?
Contributed by
Lovely_4_steve
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:50:31 PM in AEST
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When can I see you again?
Be safely in your arms, away from all the fears.
You wiping away all of my tears, holding me dear.
It's be so long, you say two more years, what if I'm not hear? How can I tell you how I feel?
to tell you the reason I hold you so dear, would be all that you need to hear. It's not that I want you to come back. It's that I need you to come back.
To hold me close, to let me know the love you hold.
Running your hands through my hair, looking into my eyes.
To have you soft hands hold up my face, to kiss me so softly full of passion...
To let you take me away, far away from pain, fear, and sadness.
Just to let you hold me when I need it.
When can I see you again?
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Re: When can I see you again?
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:02:55 PM AEST
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| i can understand why you want these things, but i do not think its essential to your survival that you need them. you can live without that person. if they are a person of honor then they will come back and if they are not then you are better off without them. if you need to tell them how deeply you feel you will find a way to express it to them. |
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Re: When can I see you again?
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:45:28 AM AEST
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I agree that you be better with him.
sense he isn't back yet by now.
good write.
Need to check your spelling. :) |
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Re: When can I see you again?
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:46:30 AM AEST
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OOps i mean without him lol.
And here i did it too .
lmao. |
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Re: When can I see you again?
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:29:58 AM AEST
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This poem was not meant for some one, just one of the top of my head... Thank you, for your comments though. also sorry if my spelling was incorrect.
~*Lovely_4_Steve*~ |
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