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See yourself in me
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You hit me, hurt me
Bite me, burn me
Your words sting me
Vitriolically
The poison I bleed
You put it in me
The pain I now need
You first gave it to me
I thank you for all
You’ve given to me
You gave me all I have
My insanity
And when the knife passes through your gut
And your shocked gaze slowly raises up
Look into my eyes and see the last you’ll ever see
In your last few moments, see yourself in me
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2004-06-02 22:19:57]
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Re: See yourself in me
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:24:14 PM AEST
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Strong cutting words...
it's a great poem - but not one i would ever want directed at me :-S |
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Re: See yourself in me
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:50:04 PM AEST
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Very strong imagery. I know the feeling. I don't think I could go that far, though. Hope you forgive and move on.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: See yourself in me
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by adanawa on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:22:04 AM AEST
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| strong very strong well done----adanawa |
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