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Draw Closer

Contributed by nubianwaters on Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When the slowing of the day is at this juncture
Will you permit me to draw closer?
Never cease to be free from bonding spirits
Never mount reneging birth’s place
A mother’s womb for that known protection
But instead press your knees to the ground and form to my thoughts
Now we understand how to break patterns of miscellaneous sentiments
Do we know and comply this knowledge?
Or instead steady into ancient African theory
That serves men with plentiful choices of odd subjections
No, we are of the Neo and Soul generations
That constant tussle and seesaw of worsening and mending
Walking through the slammed doors continuously
Kinda like Rotarian’s Theory but not quite
We are those of liberal lives with cloth wrapped around our natural hair
Yet never surviving the loves of our past like our grandparents
Baby-mommas and daddy’s perpetual complaint of child-support
The autumn is clear in hours of darkness as this one
And I undergo its air paginating my facial skin
So I stand outside to benefit from your kiss to my neck
That is my sovereignty
Will you let me come?
That state right before Buddha was deemed enlightened
He rested in his distant contentness and prayed to closeness
I pray to closeness also as I do to the spectrum of light
Circle into a spiral around my styles
Then you will be me and interchangeable we’ll be
See that is the meaning of all my poetry
Translate what I’m feeling to your experiences and who cares?
If the meaning is the same or poles apart
Press your knees to the ground and form to my thoughts

Copyright Â© nubianwaters ... [ 2002-10-13 12:00:00]
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Re: Draw Closer (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:15:31 AM AEST
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very good write. you seem well studied.

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