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New Muse
Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:18:20 PM in AEST
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For the daisy
I would love to clip
Place her in a bud vase
And baby her with words so preccious
For the joy in thought
A new muse that brought
A smile to my lately plain face
I just have to say I'm encourage
For the rain that fell
I thank God and save the tears of the angels
For my daisy when she's hungry like thirsty
For this daisy, This wordly preccious
Sweetly eligant muse has brought
Tears of angels
To a broken stone heart
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-06-02 21:18:20]
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Re: New Muse
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by Colleen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:24:43 PM AEST
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| That was such a refreshing poem! It was very well written, and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you! |
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Re: New Muse
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:45:27 PM AEST
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it's been a while since I have read something so sweetly inspirational as this...
A sense of beauty, with a touch of elegance...
Nice...
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: New Muse
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:44:17 PM AEST
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Very beautifull and so sweet. I'm sure it's appreciated very much.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: New Muse
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:55:28 AM AEST
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I like this poem alot.
It's very refreshing. |
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Re: New Muse
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:25:21 AM AEST
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This was wrought with elegance and beauty. I like these lines;
"Tears of angels
To a broken stone heart"
Lovely poem. |
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