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Sustaining Blood
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:18:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sustaining Blood
My thoughts paint red over my mind
The blood of the mistake
That slowly murders me
My thoughts paint black over my mind
The death from my mistake
I lost too much blood to sustain
My thoughts paint the landscape of Hell
My thoughts repainting my world
A world unfit to live in
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2004-06-02 21:18:17]
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Re: Sustaining Blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:23:36 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was an amazing poem. Very deep. I am sorry that you are feeling this way, I hope times get better for you! Best of luck. |
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Re: Sustaining Blood
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by morelikelyrics on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST
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Dark and brooding, but somehow amazingly eye-opening ...
I love the way you see your thoughts as the paint, very unique...
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Sustaining Blood
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by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:40:21 AM AEST
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Remember tonight.. for it is the beginning of always...Dante
For some reason this peom made me think of that line from the Inferno. This had many layers to it yet it was one that I could really feel alot of emotion coming from..There is not one part I can say is better..This stands out for me. |
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